| Epistemologist-
I cannot say "how" I feel about your words.
Yet, I see poetry in your soul, humility and intelligence flow through your words.
I see poetry in everything. The reality of your own inner nature cannot be expressed directly. Poetry attempts the expression in the most demure and direct way available to each of us, according to our state of awareness and pureness of intention.
Firstly, it is not a long, ardurous read.
Second, it is available for translation in myriad ways.
Lastly, it points at the grand design, the fundamentals of human experience and efforts.
I personally enjoy gnomic poetry. I like the direct answer shining forth from verbal gemstones, capturing a notion in many minor pieces.
Continue to write and see the product change with your emotional and literary maturity. Within the attempt to poeticize, there is a glimpse of one's true nature. As the poetry becomes clearer and more direct without losing the artfulness, so too witness yourself as clear and direct.
A warning!
Silent predation
is a silken trap and a toothy cipher:
Even a Lion stalks openly!
Fear That-which-hunts-alone
without fear
Forever unknown
Find yourself innocent,
Epistemologist
you are a cannible
Auto-phage
ignorant
with blood on your tongue.
Please post more and share the beauty of your experience with us all...
your parents and your children.
Found,
Dadoo
Heartbeat, the only song
you will not hear
until it's gone. |