[G. Adams]

I take it the phrase "No taxation without representation" means nothing to you then?

And your final article, that none-citizens will not be allowed to invest, how do you propose a none citizen establish a business without investing in their own business?

Additionally, who will set the exams? How do you prevent that system from being abused, as the bar of knowledge (sounds like something the Knights who say Nee would search for) for citizenship could be significantly raised, making it difficult for all those who cannot afford a top notch education to gain citizenship.

What happens if looney minorities claim to be home-schooling, but not teaching their daughters?

As you are creating a political caste system, how do you prevent the citizens from using their representation from persecuting the none-citizens? For example, they could deem none-citizens as not being able to carry fire-arms, or be subject to greater taxation.